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Broken wings and foolish dreams
Things that make us think
We live to love and love to live
The only thing that makes us give

A lonely hope of distant truth
A loss that we all share
Has reigned itself upon our hour
And makes us hide and fearfully cower

Thr arbitrary being settles himself in our land
Only wishing for pain
However, we have wished the opposite
Though our human wishes we do not get

And when he raises his alabaster body
Back into the fiery sky
We cry in pain with tears of hope
But with this god we learned to cope

The moral of this morbid story
Is what you have learned
Live the moment and want no more
Learn to cope with what is yours
©2007-2008 ~whispering-flames
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~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 12, 2007, 4:52:53 PM
Wow. I really like this one. It reminds me of someone elses writing, but done your way. Very nice.

Too bad I can't remember whose....

--
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 12, 2007, 4:57:07 PM
Thank you ^_^ I like this one too. This actually just came to me, no thinking involved. I just started typing and, there is was...amazingness! hmm, I wonder, I wouldn't know whose writing it sounds like...poe?shakespeare?frost?

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The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 12, 2007, 5:00:18 PM
Definently not Shakespeare. Shakespeare tended to write in iambic pentameter (usually blank verse) or sonnets. Poe, I don't think so. Frost, definently not.

Hmmm... who could it be?

--
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 12, 2007, 5:06:53 PM
I have no clue. But...I hate iambic pentameter...ithas always conused me...I really can't think of who it could be...

--
The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 12, 2007, 5:11:14 PM
I love Iambic pentameter.

And I can think of who it could be.

--
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 15, 2007, 2:54:26 PM
Oh, then who is it?

--
The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 15, 2007, 4:05:25 PM
Why don't you tell me?

--
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 17, 2007, 1:24:04 PM
Is it you?

--
The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 17, 2007, 1:25:45 PM
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--
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
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