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Dreams of foolish mortal men
Dreaming things that have never been
The weak hearted take this prize,
Blinded in their senses they take this prize,
And hold it close with lonely cries.

The strong willed ones push it away
Down in that darkening grave they lay
With mutilated hearts and broken seams,
Ah, their bodies all broken seams,
They should have grasped that foolish dream.

And what of the ones who block their minds
Trying to break free of all their binds
They take this gift and rip it to shreds,
Out of their minds they rip it to shreds,
And they fall upon their cold deathbeds.

The world is full of chaos and hope
And with that dream, we learn to cope
Grasping the disease of human pride,
The sickening disease of human pride,
We grasped that dream, and the disease then died.
©2007-2008 ~whispering-flames
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~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 12, 2007, 4:56:01 PM
It's about thinking. The danger and beauty of thinking about things, learning things. Knowlege can bring pain, but those who keep and hold it tight survive when the close-minded fall.

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We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 12, 2007, 5:02:21 PM
Wow, that gave me a good answer, I didn't even know what t was about. Now that I think about it, that really fits ^_^

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The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real
~Nani-Midori:iconNani-Midori: Oct 12, 2007, 5:04:57 PM
Your welcome.

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We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.
-- Oscar Wilde
~NeoxFlame:iconNeoxFlame: Oct 15, 2007, 5:34:57 AM Mood: Wow!
Wow. Great work!

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"A good and bad event takes place every day. But the way you look at them determines if either two good or two bad things happen each day."
~whispering-flames:iconwhispering-flames: Oct 17, 2007, 1:23:17 PM
Thank you ^_^

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The best thing about dreams is the fleeting moment,when you are between sleep and awake and you dont know the difference between reality and fantasy.when for just that one moment you feel with your entire soul that the dream is reality and it was real